Changes between Version 41 and Version 42 of GCI/QA/ImproveEnglish

Timestamp:

04/16/20 19:38:51 (4 years ago)

Author:

Joel Sherrill

Comment:

Replace Quick_Start wiki link with documentation link

GCI/QA/ImproveEnglish

@@ -18 +18 @@
 || nivy || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Docs/New_Manual || "In this example the new manual is called `new-manual`." There should be a comma after 'In this example'
 || nivy || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Docs/New_Manual || "A new manual is created by added the manual's directory to the top level directory..." 'Added' should be changed to 'adding'
-|| Mehularora || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/UserManual/Quick_Start || "If you are new to RTEMS we suggest starting on the SPARC ERC32 BSP." There should be a comma between 'RTEMS' and 'we'. 
-|| Mehularora || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/UserManual/Quick_Start || "Installing the Tools." 'Installing' should be replaced by 'Install'. 
+|| Mehularora || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/start/index.html || "If you are new to RTEMS we suggest starting on the SPARC ERC32 BSP." There should be a comma between 'RTEMS' and 'we'. 
+|| Mehularora || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/start/index.html || "Installing the Tools." 'Installing' should be replaced by 'Install'. 
 || Mehularora || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects || "If you are not sure please review existing open projects as an example." There should be a comma between 'sure' and 'please'. 
 || Mehularora || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects || "If this is a SoC Project one of the mentors of the project should be mentioned in the Owner field and you should CC the rest of the mentors." There should be a comma between 'Project' and 'one'. 
@@ -25 +25 @@
 || Karox || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/GCI || ' If you ever find yourself in need of assistance you can always reach out to gci AT rtems DOT org by email, and one of our mentors will respond as quickly as they can. ' there should be a comma between ' assistance ' and ' you '
 || Karox || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/WikiStart || ' If you know the branch please select the Create Bug for the release in the Releases table. ' there should be a comma between 'branch' and 'please' 
-|| Karox || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/UserManual/Quick_Start || ' Below is a link to how to build libraries for use with more complex packages ' it should be edited to be read as ' There is a link provided below on how to build libraries for use with more complex packages. '
-|| Karox || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/UserManual/Quick_Start || ' WARNING: It is absolutely critical that the target name provided to the RTEMS configure command be that same as that used to build binutils, gcc, newlib, and gdb. ' the word 'that' should be replaced by 'the' between 'be' and 'same'
-|| Karox || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/UserManual/Quick_Start || ' Replace 4.11 with the proper version. Also for 4.11 and older, use the erc32 BSP. For 5.1 and newer, use the erc32 BSP. ' there is a missing comma between 'Also' and 'for'
+|| Karox || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/start/index.html || ' Below is a link to how to build libraries for use with more complex packages ' it should be edited to be read as ' There is a link provided below on how to build libraries for use with more complex packages. '
+|| Karox || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/start/index.html || ' WARNING: It is absolutely critical that the target name provided to the RTEMS configure command be that same as that used to build binutils, gcc, newlib, and gdb. ' the word 'that' should be replaced by 'the' between 'be' and 'same'
+|| Karox || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/start/index.html || ' Replace 4.11 with the proper version. Also for 4.11 and older, use the erc32 BSP. For 5.1 and newer, use the erc32 BSP. ' there is a missing comma between 'Also' and 'for'
 || Thegurshack || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/Contributing || 'If the patch is too big posting it gzipped is acceptable' there should be a comma after 'big'
 || Thegurshack || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/Contributing || 'If you do not have the Git repository available then you can use the diff program' there is a missing comma after 'available'