Changes between Version 39 and Version 40 of GCI/QA/ImproveEnglish


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Dec 10, 2018, 5:01:39 PM (7 months ago)
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akiyamamio987
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    5252|| Ludicrous || [https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects] || 'Implement current version of ​µITRON Interface.' The determiners 'a' or 'the' should precede 'current' (Implement a current version of..)\\
    5353|| Ludicrous || [https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects] || 'itron support was removed from RTEMS due to lack of interest.' 'itron' should be capitalised. (ITRON)\\
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     54|| akiyamamio123 || [https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Mission_Statement] || 'The free software goals of the project are' should be rephrased to 'Free software project's goals are'.\\
     55|| akiyamamio123 || [https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/WikiStart] || 'If you are new to RTEMS and the community, welcome.' Add an exclamation mark "!" after welcome. (welcome!)\\
     56|| akiyamamio123 || [https://www.rtems.org/] || 'The RTEMS Foundation has received a letter from On-Line Applications Corporation (OAR)'. There should be "Research" before Corporation.\\
     57|| akiyamamio123 || [https://www.rtems.org/] || 'The RTEMS Kickstart Class will be held on Monday'. Hyphen between kick and start (kick-start)\\
     58|| akiyamamio123 || [https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/GCI] || 'Google Code-In (GCI) is a contest introducing 13-17 year old...' It should be "years old" instead of "year old".\\
     59|| akiyamamio123 || [https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/GCI] || 'The students in the GCI program are 13-17 and...' Add 'years old' after 13-17 since its an ambiguous statement whether you're talking about age or quantity.\\
     60|| akiyamamio123 || [https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/GSoC] || 'Please use this page as a jumping off point for participating in these...' Add hyphen between jumping and off. (jumping-off point)\\
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