Changes between Version 26 and Version 27 of GCI/QA/ImproveEnglish


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Dec 8, 2018, 4:15:15 PM (6 months ago)
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Ludicrous
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    2929|| ShyMel || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects || In the API Layers Projects section of the table the owner's name Joel should be capitalized
    3030|| ShyMel || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects || 'USB stack - Ask about possible addition of other device types.' Should be rephrased to the possible addition of other device types.
    31 || ABR || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/UserManual/Quick_Start || "Note, the following is for RTEMS 4.11, and assumes you have a valid sparc-rtems4.11-toolchain in your PATH." there should be no comma after 4.11. The irrelevant comas give an unneeded pause and disrupt user flow while reading.
     31|| ABR || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/UserManual/Quick_Start || "Note, the following is for RTEMS 4.11, and assumes you have a valid sparc-rtems4.11-toolchain in your PATH." there should be no comma after 4.11. The irrelevant comas give an unneeded pause and disrupt user flow while reading.\\
     32|| Ludicrous || [https://www.rtems.org] || 'Commercial support is available from US and European companies' 'From US' should be changed to 'from the US'.\\
     33|| Ludicrous || [https://www.rtems.org/news] || '04/05/2017; High Performance RTEMS SMP Presentation at DASIA2017' 'High Performance' should have a hyphen in it.\\
     34|| Ludicrous || [https://devel.rtems.org] || 'you need to build a cross-compiler tool set and RTEMS.' 'tool set' should be a single word (toolset).\\
     35|| Ludicrous || [https://www.rtems.org/license] || 'requires graphic to be displayed on website hosted' 'graphic' should be changed to 'graphics'.\\
     36|| Ludicrous || [https://www.rtems.org/license] || 'requires graphic to be displayed on website hosted' 'on website hosted' should be rephrased to 'on the website hosted'.\\
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