Changes between Version 17 and Version 18 of GCI/QA/ImproveEnglish


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Nov 21, 2018, 3:11:47 PM (7 months ago)
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Gedare Bloom
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    1919|| ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/GCI/Coding/POSIXTimingTest#DirectionsforMentors || 'It should be based upon the templates in rtems-testing.' the word 'upon' should be changed to 'on'.
    2020|| ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/GCI/Coding/POSIXTimingTest#DirectionsforMentors || 'The following is a link to the Comma Separated Value (e.g., .csv) file which is exported from the spreadsheet used to track the status of this effort.' the phrase 'the following' is incorrect and should be replaced with only 'following'.
     21|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/start/index.html || "Build the RTEMS Kernel (Chapter 7 Section 3.2.2 - Building the Kernel) by cloning the repository, running the bootstrap procecure, building and finally installing the kernel:". 'Procedure' misspelt as 'prcecure'.
     22|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/ecosys/index.html || "You can and should select the work-flow that best suites the demands of your project and what you are delivering". 'suites' should be 'suits'
     23|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/ecosys/index.html ||"A user can create an archive of the complete build process including all the source code for long term storage."There should be a hyphen in between 'long term' ---> long-term
     24|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/ecosys/index.html || " It’s parts interact with the user, the host environment, and each other to make RTEMS accessible, useable and predictable."'useable' should be replaced with 'usable'
     25|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/ecosys/index.html || "You can use the --strip-components option in tar if your host tar application supports it to remove the parts you do not have write access too or you may need to unpack the tar file somewhere and copy the file tree from the level you have write access from."Instead of 'too' there should be 'to'."
     26|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/ecosys/index.html || "To install a tar file you have downloaded into your new machine’s Downloads directory in your home directoty you would enter:"instead of 'directoty' it should be 'directory'
     27|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/ecosys/index.html || "This is useful if your prefix is not accessiable, for example when building Canadian cross compiled tool sets:".'accessiable' should be replaced with 'accessible'
     28|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/ecosys/index.html || "The option to supressing installing the packages.Create the build set tar."'supressing' should be replaced with 'suppressing'
     29|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/ecosys/index.html || " As a result the ecosystem is documented at the command line level and we leave GUI and IDE integration for users and integrators."after 'as a result' a comma should be added
     30|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/ecosys/index.html || "You can use the --strip-components option in tar if your host tar application supports it to remove the parts you do not have write access too or you may need to unpack the tar file somewhere and copy the file tree from the level you have write access from."instead of 'too' there should be 'to'
     31|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/overview/index.html || "The design and development of RTEMS is located there."'is' should be replaced with 'are'
     32|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/overview/index.html || "The correctness of the system depends not only on the results of computations, but also on the time at which the results are produced."there is an unnecessary comma after computations because we do not need to use a comma while using "Not only _______ but also ____"
     33|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/overview/index.html || "Since software is a synchronous entity, this presents special problems."either 'a' should be removed if it is to refer to synchronous activity or 'a synchronous' should be replaced with 'ashynchronous'
     34|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/overview/index.html || "System components may request the executive to allocate and coordinate resources, and to wait for and trigger synchronizing conditions."there is an unnecessary comma after resources
     35|| ABR || https://docs.rtems.org/branches/master/user/index.html || "The authors have used their best efforts in preparing this material." 'in' should be replaced by 'for'
     36|| ABR || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/UserManual/Quick_Start || "Note, the following is for RTEMS 4.11, and assumes you have a valid sparc-rtems4.11-toolchain in your PATH." there should be no comma after 4.11. The irrelevant comas give an unneeded pause and disrupt user flow while reading.
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    2238=== Directions for Mentors ===