Changes between Version 15 and Version 16 of GCI/QA/ImproveEnglish

Timestamp:

11/13/18 01:56:27 (5 years ago)

Author:

ornitokya

Comment:

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GCI/QA/ImproveEnglish

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 || ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects || 'This is done if you click on the New Ticket link above' A better sentence would be 'This would have already been filled if you clicked on the New Ticket link above.'
 || ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects || 'Some projects have been proposed that are viewed as being of minor use.' A better sentence would be 'Some projects have been proposed as being of minor use'
-|| ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/BSP/Armulator || 'Special models were produced during the development of CPUs, notably the ARM9E, ARM10 and ARM11, these models helped with architectural decisions such as Thumb-2 and TrustZone?.'the final part of this statement should be tweaked an example would be 'models helped with architectural decisions in Thumb-2 and TrustZone?.
+|| ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/BSP/Armulator || 'Special models were produced during the development of CPUs, notably the ARM9E, ARM10 and ARM11, these models helped with architectural decisions such as Thumb-2 and TrustZone.'the final part of this statement should be tweaked an example would be 'models helped with architectural decisions in Thumb-2 and TrustZone?.
 || ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/GCI/Coding/POSIXTimingTest#DirectionsforMentors || 'It should be based upon the templates in rtems-testing.' the word 'upon' should be changed to 'on'.
+|| ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/GCI/Coding/POSIXTimingTest#DirectionsforMentors || 'The following is a link to the Comma Separated Value (e.g., .csv) file which is exported from the spreadsheet used to track the status of this effort.' the phrase 'the following' is incorrect and should be replaced with only 'following'.
 
 === Directions for Mentors ===