Changes between Version 14 and Version 15 of GCI/QA/ImproveEnglish


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Nov 13, 2018, 1:53:16 AM (7 months ago)
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ornitokya
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    1717|| ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects || 'Some projects have been proposed that are viewed as being of minor use.' A better sentence would be 'Some projects have been proposed as being of minor use'
    1818|| ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/BSP/Armulator || 'Special models were produced during the development of CPUs, notably the ARM9E, ARM10 and ARM11, these models helped with architectural decisions such as Thumb-2 and TrustZone?.'the final part of this statement should be tweaked an example would be 'models helped with architectural decisions in Thumb-2 and TrustZone?.
     19|| ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/GCI/Coding/POSIXTimingTest#DirectionsforMentors || 'It should be based upon the templates in rtems-testing.' the word 'upon' should be changed to 'on'.
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    2021=== Directions for Mentors ===