Changes between Version 13 and Version 14 of GCI/QA/ImproveEnglish


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11/13/18 01:34:12 (5 years ago)
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ornitokya
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    1616|| ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects || 'This is done if you click on the New Ticket link above' A better sentence would be 'This would have already been filled if you clicked on the New Ticket link above.'
    1717|| ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects || 'Some projects have been proposed that are viewed as being of minor use.' A better sentence would be 'Some projects have been proposed as being of minor use'
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     18|| ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/BSP/Armulator || 'Special models were produced during the development of CPUs, notably the ARM9E, ARM10 and ARM11, these models helped with architectural decisions such as Thumb-2 and TrustZone?.'the final part of this statement should be tweaked an example would be 'models helped with architectural decisions in Thumb-2 and TrustZone?.
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    2020=== Directions for Mentors ===