Changes between Version 13 and Version 14 of GCI/QA/ImproveEnglish
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- 11/13/18 01:34:12 (5 years ago)
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v13 v14 16 16 || ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects || 'This is done if you click on the New Ticket link above' A better sentence would be 'This would have already been filled if you clicked on the New Ticket link above.' 17 17 || ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/Developer/OpenProjects || 'Some projects have been proposed that are viewed as being of minor use.' A better sentence would be 'Some projects have been proposed as being of minor use' 18 18 || ornitokya || https://devel.rtems.org/wiki/TBR/BSP/Armulator || 'Special models were produced during the development of CPUs, notably the ARM9E, ARM10 and ARM11, these models helped with architectural decisions such as Thumb-2 and TrustZone?.'the final part of this statement should be tweaked an example would be 'models helped with architectural decisions in Thumb-2 and TrustZone?. 19 19 20 20 === Directions for Mentors ===