Changes between Version 6 and Version 7 of NewTicket

Timestamp:

11/15/18 20:22:07 (6 years ago)

Author:

Denth

Comment:

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NewTicket

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 = Please Read Before Creating a Ticket =
 
-Thank you for your interest in submitting a bug report.  Before you get started please read through this short document to better help us address the issue you will be reporting.
+Thank you for your interest in submitting a bug report.  Before you get started, please read through this short document to better help us address the issue you will be reporting.
 
-[[Notice(Before submitting a ticket please try the following three things)]]
+[[Notice(Before submitting a ticket, please try the following three things:)]]
 
  1. View the [https://devel.rtems.org/query View Tickets] Page
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 = Required Information =
-It's not mandatory to fill in all information, but at the very least these fields are required:
+It's not mandatory to fill in all the information, but at the very least, these fields are required:
 
  1. '''Summary'''
-  * Keep this short and concise to what your problem is.
+  * Keep this short and concise as to what your problem is.
  1. '''Description'''
   * Include as many details of your problem as possible.
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   * '''enhancement''' - A feature request in the software, or addition to the documentation.
  1. '''Version'''
-  * Set it to the version you're using, if it is the [wiki:Developer/Git Git] version (not an official release) then set it to ''master''.
+  * Set it to the version you're using. If it is the [wiki:Developer/Git Git] version (not an official release), then set it to ''master''.
  1. '''Test Cases'''
   * Where possible, please attach or provide an in-line example that reproduces this problem.  Try to make it the least possible amount of code to trigger the issue.
 
 == Attaching Files ==
-If you have any external files such as screenshots or examples, please ''attach'' these as files to the ticket __do not use external hosting__, if you use external hosting then our historical record is broken when those files are no longer available.
+If you have any external files, such as screenshots or examples, please ''attach'' these as files to the ticket. __Do not use external hosting__, as if you do use external hosting, then our historical record is broken when those files are no longer available.
 
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 = Fields =
-Some fields should only be set by the developers as it's not always clear what they should be set to feel free to make your own choices.
+Some fields should only be set by the developers, as it's not always clear what they should be set to. Feel free to make your own choices.
 
 
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 = Submitting a Ticket =
-In order to submit a ticket you must first [/register register].
+In order to submit a ticket, you must first [/register register].
 
-As long as you've read this page, then [/newticket submit a ticket!].
+If you've read this page, you can [/newticket submit a ticket].